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Originally Posted by Karak
Didn't have time to comment on this yesterday, but this dialogue is A quality. I'd give it an A+, but I'd rather you say "You're coming to see a movie with me" rather than "we should hit up a movie."
I'm just being nitty, though, and I like the way you framed this.
Thanks for the compliment.
Yeah, I could have gone either way and the matter-of-fact statement to that effect is definitely something I do sometimes when pursuing a date, but I was pretty much going off the cuff and what I said was what came out. Don't worry, your suggestion was already in the arsenal, I just don't word things the same way every time. I was happy enough with it since I did at least assert the "yes you can," and ended on a statement instead of a question. Especially when dealing with less assertive girls, there's usually points to be scored by taking charge.
She's just a scared little bunny, and I'm a big ****ing bear. (I remember you mentioned that you haven't seen Swingers yet. Seriously, once your semester ends, that needs to be the next flick you rent.)
Anyway, I'll shoot her an e-mail on Wednesday to firm up Friday plans, since I'm pretty sure that's when showtimes for the weekend come out.