Wow, powerful accommodations have been made, the stars must be aligned, so it appears the time has come to put forth my own humble request. This is regarding a story in my blog. No, it's not a plea to omit any one of the sordid tragicomedies of my youth, because actually I'm unduly proud of all those ramblings and I wear them as a badge of honor as evidence of the fight well fought.
I am also not requesting a change to my bizarrely random comma structures, which sometimes spill about the page like raindrops on the ground, no discernible logic anywhere in sight. The thing that weighs so heavily on my mind is a single word in all that tundra; I used the word "watched" when I think that I should have used the word "seen", it would make the meter flow more effectively and the words would fly more easily off the tongue.
I'm well aware that most people have other things in life which may "seem" at first glance to be more pressing, more important in the overall scheme of things, but put me on the list anyway, one more voice in the insanity that is your very own life in the fast lane. (And before you ask about niss, as can be imagined, I've burdened him before and don't wish to do so again. Thanks, niss.)
Best regards to all.