The 1st one, which was ok



and th 2nd one which i particularly liked.



Tell me what u think.. I did stupid **** at both, but ramon..

wow... you posted 100+ hands and want feedback? you're lucky im bored, we'll see how far i get....

Hand 1: fold, don't limp
Hand 5: Raise more.. bet flop
Hand 8: Fold
Hand 10: Fold or raise, don't just complete
Hand 11: Bet flop, quit slowplaying top pair
Hand 12: I raise preflop 4 handed
Hand 15: Raise the ace on the button 4 handed
Hand 18: Don't complete, raise or fold
Hand 19: Don't limp 52s otb.. raise it or fold
Hand 21: I'm not sure if I like that call or not.. he's been pretty tight in the hands supplied... I think I fold A8 there
Hand 25: Quit limping from the button 3 and 4 handed with the chip lead
Hand 30: Quit completing the sb so much with junk when folded to
Hand 34: Why are we limping from the button 3 handed with the chip lead with 94o?
Hand 40: Don't limp 66 from the button 3handed
Hand 44: I dunno about that call with just ace high.. but you may have had a read on him
Hand 47: Don't like limping otb with J6s then calling his 13bb shove


Basically... you seemed to slowplay top pair too much.. limped the button a lot.. and completed the sb when folded to with atc


I am now tired enough to go to bed... if someone wants to dissect the 2nd set of hh's..... i'd be surprised

looked @ first

whoa....took so long

ok neway

i noticed u play passive a bit...folding Ax from the button when 4 handed n wut not

I also noticed u like 2 check when u hit, and bet when u miss...sumthing's wrong with dat i think

1st one
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Hand 5: raise more OOP - 80, maybe 100...bet out on flop..considering the hand range he limped with, u dnt want to let him draw out for free
Hand 9: im neutral about the limping, i think in these 6maxs sometimes raising is better than limprerasing...i like the check calling, looks like ur drawing and lets him take the aggression...mistake not to shove river i think...ur only behind to 2s, and he WILL stack off with 2 pair there
Hand 10: while u should really be widening ur range when u complete, utter garbage like 32os is still an easy fold
Hand 11: considering he might have overs, i think u bet the flop, call is fine on turn, the 6 on river is a bit scary, but if u bet flop AND turn, u can cancel that from his range..turns out if u had bet flop u prolly might have taken a bit more from him
Hand 12: i disagree with above poster...stacks/blind ratio is still deep enough where set mining is ok (i think i may be slightly off but wtv) and since ull almost always flop 3 overcards, best not to build big pot ==> BUT, u DEFINITELY bet that flop,
Hand 15: yeah, maybe raising is ok, i dnt think folding is that bad if u think blinds are loose cuz A2 sux postflop
Hand 18: i take a stab at the pot on the flop...ppl dnt like to mess around with chipleader on paired boards if they dnt have smthg decent to continue with (JT, a 9, or a strong 8)
Hand 19: gtfo => fold that **** (or raise if u want like above poster says but still nt my favourite play) ==> limping there definitely sux donkey dick
Hand 21: agree with above poster...i think im only calling AJ and 77 + there ==> but u sucked out so obv im wrong
Hand 23: v bad flop call...thats a bad flop for u, may or may not have hit his range (i think it did for sure there) but his flop bet looks strong
Hand 25: agreed...esp with the stack/blind ration, eaasy raise with 9Tcc on the button ==> u gotta learn how to rape the bubble
Hand 29: bet flop, around 225 ==> same as hand 18
Hand 33: ddnt u raise his last 2 BBs from the SB...maybe take it easy every few hands cuz sometimes ppl spiteshove cuz u raise too much...its imp to give the perception that ur not abusing the table at the bubble when in reality u are
Hand 34: GTFO => and at least bet the **** flop if ur gna try that...
Hand 37: stop limping on button
Hand 38: i think thats a pretty **** board for him, and even tho the 300potbet looks like a steal, id say check the turn and let him catch the river since there are like zero draws (pretty much) there...bet 3/4 pot on river
Hand 40: dnt limp 6s there...thats a raise/fold to shove from zumia/call Helmoinator situation
Hand 42: i really try to keep myself from completing at this stage...ppl just start shoving too much...raise or fold
Hand 44: wow...well, i dnt know if i like the raise, maybe raise more or just auto-shove there...flop call is v thin considering he could be calling with a small pair like 7s or 8s there but like weve talked about...these 3$ 6maxsngs are so donkinfested that ppl do **** ******ed **** so maybe a call on that board is profitable at these stakes
Hand 47: horible call ==> sucked out again

i agree with the Ksight as well about checkin when u hit and betting when u miss too much, but thats not too hard to fix...u basically stacked 3 guys by making what would be described at best 3 very questionable calls (tho one of them was correct, i think u can avoid that situation entirely by shoving the A9 in ur BB,which u should do against ppl completing there) 1 one of them donk-worthy (j6), and had to suck out (A8)

thnx alot for the help guys.. I posted those hands so that kapitalas evaluates my play, but ur observations come in more than useful.Thnx alot.. perhaps i posted this in the wrong section - Ive been grinding those 3$ sngs for quite a while, so i tried to mix things up a bit. I hadnt realized u guys consider the button raise so standard. From now on i will utilize it. So thnx again, and cheers. If ur not too bored at looking at the second set of hands, i wouldnt mind all that much it would be quite helpful actually.

thxn again, and cheers!!

Like the others said, you play a little too passively at times. The biggest problem I've noticed is that you call 3-bets too light. Here are some comments about a few of the hands.

Hand 1: You need to raise more. Raising 3xBB with a limper isn't going to get you heads up. Somebody who limped is probably going to be willing to see a flop for another 40. I would raise to 5xBB here. This should get you heads up if it doesn't take down the pot right here.

Hand 7: I would fold here. I don't play alot of 6-max, so this might be ok, but its the first level of a SNG so I would rather fold. The blinds are so small right now, that is not worth it here.

Hand 10: Don't open limp. If you want to play the hand then raise. Re-raising gives you a chance to take the pot down on the flop with a continuation bet. The only way you are going to win when you limp is if you connect on the flop. There are 4 players left to act and if the button has any brains, he should be raising light here since you are showing weakness by open limping.

Hand 15: You open limp again. This is a great spot to raise. You will pick up the blinds most of the time here and if you get called, a c-bet will usually take it down for you on the flop. Here is a good post about why open limping is bad.

http://archives1.twoplustwo.com/show...rt=1&vc=1&nt=5

Hand 23: I don't like this at all. If you don't believe him, you should just re-raise his flop bet. Your line doesn't scream strong hand. You check before the flop, check-call on the flop, and then bet the turn? If I was your opponent, I would be re-raising you on the turn because you seem really weak here. I would think that you were trying to take the pot off me.

Hand 34: You call the re-raise with K8s. I realize you have position, but your opponent hasn't re-raised enough at this table to think that K8s is good here sometimes. It also isn't a good time to try and get fancy and steal this pot from him since he is showing strength.

Hand 48: You do it again here. This time with a very bad hand, 82o. At least in the K8s hand, you have some showdown value. Here you have none. Even if this guy was 3-betting really light, he is ahead of you almost 100% of the time.

Hand 52: I don't really like the all in on the turn. A smaller re-raise here will do the same thing, and leave you with some room to fold the hand if he comes over the top. The all in puts your tournament on the line with a weak hand in a spot where you may be way behind.

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