it hought it was really good, not even funny just good. i thought it would have been better with just a few word changes like "little doyle" sounds stupid, and also i would change viscemetomy to just "i don't have any diseases and i can't have kids", sounds better to my ear think it goes better with the tone of your story
good up until he mentions little doyle, then she says, don't worry I'm not pregnant, i wasn't exactly honest either, cue crying game music, and then you can lead right into the killing spree.
the great thing is that since he is killer now he gots nothing to lose. so what he does is kill, and then go to blow off all his dough since he don't need it. then the story get's interesting cause he runs hot as hell, and all the stress has made him crazy where he honestly believes that the killing has given him the power to be unbeatable at poker. so after one week he has killed a half dozen people and his bankroll is over a million dollars.
1. Mike will run into Worm in Vegas. Worm hasn't changed but Mike has and will tell him to **** off and die.
2. Mike will win entry to the WSOP ME via a B&M Satellite. He makes the final table and goes out 4th.
3. He has some type of minor legal issue so he call his old girlfriend who is now a lawyer. She comes out and want to get back together with him, now that he is rich and successful. He remember she never had sex with him in the first movie and shows off the twins he is dating.