800$/week for an appartment ???

U can stay at the BORGATA for 800$/week !

- jpp

"and I don't have aids",

This post does

Grinders should obviously be the story of 2 poker nerds grinding in their parent's basement who eventually make it big then move to vegas and lose it all through personal leaks.

lol i thought this was hiliarous

A+

Only flaw imo. who pays for a cab to get around town and then buys a car?

the fact that i read it through is at least a B+, i dont' see any tl;dr posts

OP is clearly a poker player, and not a mathematician.

LOLOLOLOL

C

rofl i would watch this movie

Exactly where it left off...

Fading in on a 10 year cab ride with a bearded Mikey Mc"D" finally reaching Vegas only to find the cab fare is $29,900...and 12 hours til ME.

Can't believe this guy wasted his time thinking about this, and then posting about it lol...

not only did he think about this, he thought about this enough to think about it, write what he was thinking down, re read and reflect on it, then decide it was "crafty" or "clever". Then he posted it on 2p2.

or go with my life story instead........

http://archives1.twoplustwo.com/show...c=&Search=true

How is that not believable? You don't get out much.

800 a week? He must be living in the fountain at the Bellagio, cause he's nowhere near the rooms.

good up until he mentions little doyle, then she says, don't worry I'm not pregnant, i wasn't exactly honest either, cue crying game music, and then you can lead right into the killing spree.

the great thing is that since he is killer now he gots nothing to lose. so what he does is kill, and then go to blow off all his dough since he don't need it. then the story get's interesting cause he runs hot as hell, and all the stress has made him crazy where he honestly believes that the killing has given him the power to be unbeatable at poker. so after one week he has killed a half dozen people and his bankroll is over a million dollars.

seriously this movie can be made.

The old fake visectomy trick

why did you do this

I mean, that's just the setup. like the first 30 minutes. after that you need plot twists and stuff.

: laugh:

it's funny to see the people who say "it was good until the hooker," like the boring unfunny stuff was remotely interesting. i just imagine you watching a full movie of some guy apartment shopping and car shopping and playing standard casino poker. i thought it was a decent start to a "write a short story" thread, then was reminded of how ******ed nvg is when the first 20 responses were "he's overpaying for his apartment"

i stand by this

someone that didn't have a car but needed to get somewhere, then decided to buy a car at a later time, imo.

People will think the movie is about sandwiches.