haven't put one of these up in a while...I made so many mistakes it makes me sick here but lol donkaments I was still able to ship.

Heads up was interesting and longer than it should have been...

please flame away if interested

Watched first 100 hands and liked everything besides two marginal opens you didnt pick up with KTo from the Btn and A7s from the CO. But at low blind levels it´s not an issue I suppose.
Only mistake imo is the complete with 96o in hand 73.

Yeah, and solid flop hitting skills.

okay i made it through and have some thoughts for you. i think you played really well up until you got heads-up and from there i think you played okay, a little passively for my taste. here are my notes on things i do differently:

hand 103 raise pre w/33 and fire flop (don't like the limp unless you are balancing limps with suited c's and big pairs).

107 open 33 in c/o

110 don't like your open w/ 89s because 1player behind has 10 bbs as well as big blind, going to showdown ruins your image here

114 RR enough to put shorty all in

119 fold pre, AJs not strong enough here, AQ I play though, you're in a really bad spot if someone raises behind you after your rr pre

142 stab flop and barrel most turns, opp unlikely have ace and you could have a bad one given pre action.

157 RR to 3500 fold to BB shove, call opener (don't think you're getting exploited by big blind much here).

163 interesting stack size spot, stab turn for 2-3k?

169 good spot to raise pre w/ stack sizes behind you

252/271 both these hands 99/AQ i make normal raises w/intention of calling shoves because they are so strong, let someone spazz out with 22-66, AJ etc.

317 shove here instead of 3x, don't like giving the illusion of fold equity(though i would fold to his push). just a slight prefence for shoving here vs raise folding.

325 gross spot getting near 2:1

345 don't understand your raise pre here w T4s oop

347 bet flop

348 fold pre after he raises (by this point it's pretty clear he is raising a very tight range headsup let this one go pre and pick on him on basically any/every other hand.

350 raise pre. i think you need to be more aggressive in position against this opponent with playable hands. okay to limp your junk, but i'm definitely raising anything playable against a straight forward loose passive like this guy. I'm also cbetting alot making lots of small stabs and trying to grind him down.

352 bet flop, dry flop no reason to check and give up the lead, the best hand pre should be ahead and that's what you repped.

355 don't like pfr, you've got an okay hand that could flop well oop, no reason to believe he'll fold after limping either. against this guy i would only raise oop for value.

362 bet less on flop 3500-4k you flopped monster and are only worried bout gutters

365 fold pre, he's raising a very tight range and you can just grind him down instead of trying to flop a monster on him.

368 raise pre, he's not aggro so it's unlikely you get to limp rr him

372 raise pre

thanks for posting the hh and let me know if you have questions about my critique.

why is 318 a fold?

shouldnt be but I hate playing A rag to a ship...you are correct that I should have opened it

Hand #5 - Anyone just make a Cbet there? I love to bet into flops that I hit like that.

hand 5? I folded UTG...

i think he means hand 4 and yes cbetting is good there, with the pot being so small because of the blinds, i really like a bet, bet , bet line.

problem I have with that big a flop that early is I have no idea of my opponents tendencies...I erred on th side of not wanting to lose him if he called pretty wide pre and also tried to allow him to bluff or catch up...

not ideal but wanted to get at least one more street of value

Yeah, I meant hand #4. I understand where you are coming from though. I also like to bet there because if you get to showdown people will see that you are betting even your really strong hands on the flop so they will be less likely to float you and fold to your standard Cbets later on. Plus you can start picking up those pots with the "QQ4" flop when no one else seems interested.