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Originally Posted by Blarg
Because I think the characterization was uninteresting, corny, and lacked insight. Saying it was merely flat would be sweeping a lot of fair criticism under the rug. The flatness of the characters was made more insufferable by the interminable length you had to hang around them while they declined to do anything. King's self-indulgence was atrocious in this book, nearly awe-inspiring in a perverse way. He created long scenes peopled by dull, corny characters in which nothing of interest happened, eventually piling up enough of them that he had over a thousand pages, more than half of which could have been cut without harming the book. Doing so would actually improve it.
When an author is as drastically off the mark as King was in The Stand, I think you've got a book that basically didn't deserve to get published. Some of my objections to King's self-indulgent, disinterested style of writing and the abyss it can lead his works into are detailed in the posts I started this thread with, about his book On Writing. When King is hitting on all cylinders, he is wonderful. He has written before of liking "muscular writers." But he can be one of the flabbiest writers out there.
True. I tend to prefer his short stories for just that reason. But, as you say, when he's on, his novels can be joyfully immersible.
Not to spend too much time with an impassioned defense of
The Stand, because I think it's mostly just a big, ol' fun book about the end of civilization. I don't know that deeper character dimension would have added to the fun. I don't think of it as a literary masterpiece as much as a "popcorn" epic.
That said, I frankly thought the characterization of the four primary figures was pretty well fleshed out. No more or less, to my mind, than the primary characters in
The Shining or
Salem's Lot. But those books had far fewer characters.
The Stand's sheer volume of "supporting characters" lends itself to a more cartoonish method of overall characterization. Also, the book is no different than any other book that has pretensions of being "Biblical" in scope. As in the Bible, most of the characters are, to better serve the epic conceits of the storyline, binary; either good or evil. Deeper character exploration is there, but only in a few instances (King David, maybe, or Simon Peter). Anything else would be a distraction.
In the case of
The Shining, when you're able to focus the entire book on basically four people, and you're not involved in some "good vs. evil" storyline on a grand, macro-scale, you'll have a more focused novel with more depth of character.
To be fair, I read and thoroughly enjoyed the book years ago, before the longer version came out, so I was predisposed to liking the longer version. Had I tried to read the later, longer version first, I very well may have agreed with your opinion. But because I had benefit of familiarity, the "fat" was more entertaining to me than it probably would have been otherwise. Kind of like looking at a director's cut or deleted scenes from a favorite movie, even though the original piece was more coherent. I certainly see where you and davet would be put off by the indulgence of the longer work, but, then again, King warns of that indulgence in the preface.
As to
On Writing, I read it and remember almost nothing about it. I don't know if it has been mentioned in this thread, but Ray Bradbury's
Zen and the Art of Writing is the book that should be picked up instead of
On Writing. It seems not just more practical, but far more enjoyable and inspiring.