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Originally Posted by BillNye
I had this gay assignment where I had to study poems, I noticed that the literary value of a poem comes 90% from the author and 10% from how good the poem is which doesn't make sense to me, but w/e.
Anyways I made my own poem and I think it would be famous if I was famous, without further ado:
Jeep
Just bought a new black Jeep.
Couldn't hear but a peep
Out of ma dogs layin' in da back seat.
Cuz' I just put all them bitches to sleep.
I actually think its good sort of limerickish but a lot of ppl said it sucked, what gives?
its awful- avoid rhyme structures like AAAA, its like the omaha hand, might look good to an amateur, but anyone not considering suicide should muck it.