Theoretically, it was
Telcontar's turn to describe, but at that point, I had already subbed him out for tardiness, and
Sooh kindly agreed to step in (thanks again!). It only seemed natural to hand her Telcontar's describer slot as well. Here is the result:
Pity we lost the fact that the griffon was very uncomfortable with the vampire basement's alien invasion, but it is the only small flaw in an otherwise perfect description.
Well, I would say that the aliens were terrified rather than surprised, but both could be true, I guess?