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Originally Posted by DRybes
This reply is referential cause your verses have potential
you should listen for a lesson cause some changes are essential
Get your ass up off the comp and find a paper and a pencil
Cook a hook that you can book instead of tracing off a stencil
Then its purely consequential that your fans grow exponential
People try to be your friend and talk to you all reverential
But you gotta work a while first establishing credential
And I got some other tips I'm gonna skip - it's confidential.
Boom. Listen up.
Heres Drybes teaching y'all a lesson,
Crushing crap rhymes is his profession,
You guys need to go.. and hit up confession,
Time to admit.. Vanilla Ice obsessions,
One thing the 'rybes forgot to mention,
That now requires your full attention,
Is that.. 'when you write a rhyme,
You just gotta take the time,
Put your heart in every line'
Lets not see more of the **** up above,
But hey.. I'll go now.. I think I've said enough.
Boom.
Now show me some love.