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Originally Posted by Dr. Spaceman
Nice! I really love the Hitler time travel stuff. You took it in some really funny, smart directions.
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Originally Posted by LeProtagonist
+1 definitely the funniest bit, really enjoyed it.
Thanks.
I'm glad you guys like the Hitler joke. I love doing it, there is something really fun about taking a cliched concept like that and taking it in my own direction.
As much as I like doing that joke, honestly, it only really works about half the time.
It has two pitfalls that can derail it. The first is that the moment you say 'Hitler' the energy in the room changes. It is just one of those keywords that makes a whole lot of people tighten up, which makes it all the more fun when they loosen up and come back, but some people just don't want to laugh at anything even remotely Hitler related.
The second problem is that some audiences just aren't very bright and can't follow the idea of alternate timelines. Then I've got a bunch of confused hill people staring slack jawed at me.
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Originally Posted by riverboatking
Aaron,
that was really good bro.
great material great delivery.
loved the Hitler bit think you def could expand on that and really explore the idea of a perfectly normal Hitler being turned into a paranoid jew hater due to time travellers attempting to assassinate him.
overall tho really impressive, think the next step in going from opening to perhaps doing a solid 30+ min set is to expand on some of these great premises and turn them from quick set-up - punchline into longer drawn out stories.
thanks for sharing.
if u have any other material pls post it.
cheers.
Getting from 10 minutes to 20+ is really challenging. The problem with crafting long form bits is that right now, probably 75% of the sets I get are under 10 minutes, and lots of those are 5 to 7 minutes.
Until I get to the point where I can feature and get 20 minute sets, its very hard to find sets where I can work on longer bits without making my entire set depend on that bit.
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Originally Posted by the pleasure
noodlemans delivery is so ****ing tight, i was impressed. good **** man
Thanks
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Originally Posted by Brock Landers
The homeless pet joke was very funny!
Thanks. I feel like I could write a ton of jokes about the homeless, but I've found that after about two, they just start to feel mean and the audience turns on me.