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You are the first reader to criticize the key concept bulletpoints. You will have to give an example for me to get what you mean. And maybe give some examples of the other criticisms as well.
Allright, finally got through the rest of it and will step though the niggels with examples.
First off: I don't think it's a bad book and I don't want to dissuade anyone from buying it. The book does exactly what it says on the tin: it takes the original 'Theory of Poker' and pretty much goes through it and checks which things apply to no limit games and which have to be modified.
I just want to give some comments I think could have been better as per the request in the OP.
I'll not comment too much on the good parts. Just assume anything I'm not griping about below is good. My criticisms are more niggels and about formal things.
a) Examples: A bunch of examples are for (no limit?) 2-7 triple draw. I dunno. I have never seen that game offered in casinos over here. Maybe this is wildly popular in the US? I am assuming most buyers will infer from the title this is for no limit hold'em (which it mostly is - but not exclusively so). Arguably this is a false expectation by the reader based on his own assumptions (since nowehere does it say "hold'em" on the cover...though I don't know why one has to say "35 chapters" on the cover...that really doesn't tell anyone anything) .
b) The key points at the end of chapters which are supposed to summarize it are sometimes irksom (as noted in my previous post).
Irk #1) The key points at the end of the chapter 'pot odds' are almost longer than the chapter itself.
Irk #2) Some key points in other chapters aren't particularly helpful. Here's my two least favorite ones:
2.1) Key point in chapter: Inducing and stopping bluffs
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Various techniques to stop or induce a bluff are listed in this chapter
Ermm..did the author just tell me in the summary in so many words to just read the chapter again?
I know the rule of writing is:
tell them what you're gonna tell them (introduction)
tell them what you wanna tell them (chapter content)
tell them what you told them (summary/key points)
But...damn...this is taking the last one a tiny bit too literal.
2.2) Key point in chapter: Heads-up on the End
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Go back to what you just read. You got to this line without fully understanding the previous bullet point
OK. I get it. The previous bullet point has some subtleties in it. But please don't tell me what I understood or didn't. If the author is sure that the reader doesn't understand something he wrote upon reading it - maybe he should have written it in a different way in the first place?
c)
The quoting gets
way out of hand sometimes. I get that this is supposed to work off of the previous book, but quoting two pages in a row verbatim from it (chapter on implied odds and also chapter on reading hands) is a bit much. Some other places you get half or three quarter full page quotes. Most people own the first book. They didn't want to pay for a reprint. Coupled with some unfortunate keypoints that just start off new pages and leave the rest blank it feels like some padding was going on (I understand that it's not, because books are set after they are written - but to someone who doesn't know this it sure
feels that way at times).
d)
Many times you will find formulations like: "If you estimate your opponent will fold [a hand of a particular strength category] to this betsize 30% of the time...." or similar.
I find this unhelpful. Unless my opponent shows me his cards on each of his folds there is no way to arrive at a good estimate for such numbers. Even if he did - you'd have to play an inordinate amount of the exact same hands against this opponent trying out various bet sizes and being in various positions with various stack sizes before you could confidently make an estimate in the general ballpark of 30% vs. say 10% or 50% (at which level the EV calculations sometimes flip)
On the other hand:
- I did like the chapter about inducing opponents to move away from GTO/keeping them play less optimal very much.
- The idea about how much deviation from a particular play has how much effect on EV is something that is very relevant (and could have used a lot more in-depth exploration)
- In general I found most of the 'various thoughts/bonus chapter/appendices' pretty interesting. Unfortunately they only make up the last 50 pages of the book.
Anyone who's reading this to decide whether to buy it: This is just my opinion. Since the book is not that expensive I'd just advise you to buy it and make up your own opinion and not rely on some random internet poster who isn't even a full-time poker player.
Last edited by antialias; 09-14-2019 at 07:09 PM.