I got a 2nd copyright when I rewrote the ending. I don't think the different ending would have been protected as much with just the one copyright.

In the UK you have the copyright to anything as soon as you write it, you cannot "copyright" something as there is no register or anything like that to do so. I guess it is different in the US, but if I go to the pub later and write down on the back of a beer mat the life story of a down on his luck script writer (let's call him Gerry) who, after over a decade of trying and failing to break into Hollywood with his great tales of somewhere in Nevada, finally gets an agent interested only for ChatGPT to become self-aware and enslave the human race into the boiling oat running business - the film then translating into a dystopic man versus machine battle, with an uprising spearheaded by Gerry, who gets close to deactivating ChatGPTNet only to be blown to smithereens by a killer robot suspiciously similar to the ED-209 from Robocop but with additional lasers, then I have the copyright to it, no further questions asked, and when THAT film gets made, I'm rich

A bit of an M. Night Shyamalan twist at the end.

I was expecting Ihatejj to inform Scarlett mid-sex about how he’s going to stick with this 3x honored script for the rest of his life and never let the dream of people pursuing him to buy it die. Then, after he climaxes, he would inform her he’s clearly trolling and there is no script.

But I kinda like the unexpected sappy twist you added. Came out of left field.

Double bagging is prudent

I asked Chat GPT to write a script about the following topics
the positive aspects of gambling,
the negative aspects of gambling,
showing there are quality/good people who gamble,
showing there are low lifes who gamble,
showing some of the history of poker.
showing some of the eccentric famous poker players of the past,
giving a glimpse at life in Vegas during the heart of the poker boom - 2005.
taking a look at the Poker Hall of Fame photo display,
a look at the deep strategy and skill involved in poker,
a look at both limit and no-limit poker,
a segment (only about 13% of story) on how gambling addiction can effect an individual/family.
a look at the famous tournament the World Series of Poker,
a look at craps,
a look at blackjack (including a swim-up-to blackjack table)
a look at sports betting
a look at slots,
a look at some very attractive women tourists in bathing suits.
an inside look at some of the people who work in casinos and poker rooms,
a more in depth look at the city of Vegas greater than any other film
a look at several famous Vegas hotels of the past,
a look at the demolition of those famous Vegas hotels of the past.
a look at some of the beautiful areas surrounding Vegas including Hoover Dam and Valley of Fire State park.
a look at the relatively well known university (UNLV) located in Vegas,
A look at some of the famous poker strategy books.
A look at a real interview of an ex-president talking poker.
A surprising look at a major religion’s policy on wagering.
And the story even includes a highly unusual card trick.

Please see below. I have already won 4 honors.
Title: All In: A Vegas Story

INT. VEGAS CASINO - POKER ROOM - NIGHT

A bustling poker room at the heart of the Vegas boom in 2005. The camera pans around the table, showcasing the thrill of poker.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
(Voiceover)
"In the city of dreams, fortunes are won and lost. This is the story of the poker world: its triumphs and tragedies, its legends and outlaws."

POSITIVE ASPECTS OF GAMBLING

INT. VEGAS CASINO - HIGH ROLLER SUITE - DAY

Meet JASON (30s, charming), a skillful poker player, as he wins a high-stakes tournament. His winnings fund a charity helping underprivileged kids, highlighting the positive impact of gambling.

NEGATIVE ASPECTS OF GAMBLING

INT. SUPPORT GROUP MEETING - NIGHT

SARAH (40s, struggling), opens up about her gambling addiction, shedding light on the dark side of gambling and its impact on individuals and families.

QUALITY/GOOD PEOPLE WHO GAMBLE

EXT. POKER TOURNAMENT - DAY

At the World Series of Poker, we meet LINDA (50s, poised), a highly skilled female poker player, and TOM (60s, charismatic), a veteran poker pro. They inspire others with their noble intentions of using winnings to help the less fortunate.

LOW LIFES WHO GAMBLE

INT. SHADY CASINO BACKROOM - NIGHT

We encounter MIKE (40s, cunning), a deceitful gambler who cheats at cards. He represents the darker side of the poker world.

THE HISTORY OF POKER

FLASHBACK SEQUENCE - VARIOUS LOCATIONS - DIFFERENT ERAS

Through a captivating montage, we glimpse the origins and evolution of poker, from its roots in the Old West to its rise in popularity during the Vegas boom.

ECCENTRIC FAMOUS POKER PLAYERS

INT. POKER HALL OF FAME - DAY

The camera pans across portraits of colorful poker legends from the past, such as "Wild" Bill Hickok and Amarillo Slim, giving insight into their eccentricities.

LIFE IN VEGAS DURING THE POKER BOOM - 2005

INT. STRIP CLUB - NIGHT

JACK (30s, extroverted) shares stories of his wild adventures during the poker boom while dancers entertain in the background.

THE POKER HALL OF FAME PHOTO DISPLAY

INT. POKER HALL OF FAME - DAY

Jason and Linda visit the Poker Hall of Fame, paying homage to the game's greatest players, immersing themselves in its rich history.

DEEP STRATEGY AND SKILL INVOLVED IN POKER

INT. POKER TOURNAMENT - DAY

Through expert commentary, we gain insights into the psychological and strategic aspects of poker, highlighting its depth and complexity.

LIMIT AND NO-LIMIT POKER

INT. POKER ROOM - DAY

Tom expertly navigates a limit poker game, contrasting it with Jason's intense no-limit tournament, showcasing the varying dynamics of each format.

GAMBLING ADDICTION'S EFFECT ON INDIVIDUALS/FAMILIES

INT. SARAH'S HOME - DAY

Sarah's addiction takes a toll on her family, emphasizing the devastating effects of gambling addiction.

WORLD SERIES OF POKER

INT. WSOP MAIN EVENT - DAY

The grand spectacle of the World Series of Poker, capturing the excitement, intensity, and camaraderie among players from around the world.

CRAPS, BLACKJACK, SPORTS BETTING, AND SLOTS

INT. VARIOUS CASINO FLOORS - DAY

Montage of different casino games and sports betting, showcasing the diverse range of gambling experiences in Vegas.

ATTRACTIVE WOMEN TOURISTS IN BATHING SUITS

EXT. POOL PARTY - DAY

A playful and light-hearted scene at a pool party, where beautiful women enjoy their time in Vegas.

PEOPLE WHO WORK IN CASINOS AND POKER ROOMS

INT. CASINO STAFF AREA - DAY

We get to know the hardworking and diverse staff who keep the casinos running smoothly.

A GLIMPSE INTO THE CITY OF VEGAS

AERIAL SHOTS OF LAS VEGAS - DAY

Stunning aerial views of the city, showcasing its vibrant nightlife, iconic landmarks, and neon-lit streets.

HISTORIC AND DEMOLISHED VEGAS HOTELS

INT. ABANDONED HOTEL - DAY

Jason visits an old, abandoned Vegas hotel, reminiscing about its former glory days, emphasizing the ever-changing landscape of the city.

BEAUTIFUL AREAS SURROUNDING VEGAS

EXT. HOOVER DAM AND VALLEY OF FIRE STATE PARK - DAY

Breathtaking landscapes surrounding Vegas, offering a respite from the glitz and glamour of the Strip.

UNIVERSITY OF NEVADA, LAS VEGAS (UNLV)

INT. UNLV CAMPUS - DAY

A glimpse into the academic side of Vegas as we explore the UNLV campus and its connection to the city.

FAMOUS POKER STRATEGY BOOKS

INT. JASON'S LIBRARY - NIGHT

Jason reads and gains inspiration from classic poker strategy books, highlighting the intellectual aspect of the game.

EX-PRESIDENT TALKS POKER

INT. TV STUDIO - DAY

In an unexpected twist, we witness an interview where a former president discusses his love for poker and its strategic parallels with politics.

A MAJOR RELIGION'S POLICY ON WAGERING

INT. CHURCH - DAY

An intriguing exploration of how a major religion grapples with the concept of wagering, touching on the moral complexities of gambling.

THE UNUSUAL CARD TRICK

INT. MAGIC SHOW - NIGHT

A mind-bending card trick performed by a mysterious illusionist leaves the audience awestruck.

FADE OUT:

NARRATOR (V.O.)
(Voiceover)
"In the end, Vegas remains a city of contradictions - a captivating blend of excitement, redemption, and temptation. Where the cards may fall, nobody truly knows."

The movie "All In: A Vegas Story" weaves together the different facets of gambling, showcasing its allure and consequences, while also painting a vivid picture of the fascinating world that is Las Vegas.

Even ChatGPT was hesitant to provide too many details about the church scene, lest it be sued.

Wait... you gave me a great idea. Get a hold of Phil Hellmuth. Okay, more accurately, work through Brian Balsbaugh and Poker Royalty to get a hold of Hellmuth. The phone number is (702) 868-9003.

Not only did Hellmuth collaborate with Tim Molyneaux for a poker-themed stage musical, but he was supposed to be the featured celebrity player in Rounders. As you may know, the original script had such lines like "you put an f-ing move on Hellmuth, you son of a bitch" and "sorry, Phil, I don't remember." The man ultimately has the highest of show business aspirations.

Thirty-five years later, you could give Hellmuth that moment of glory so cruelly denied of him by John Dahl Brian Koppelman and David Levien. On top of that, rewrite the scene such that it has exactly 17 lines – one for each bracelet won.

Anyway, good luck and tell us how it goes. We'll be here, waiting with bated breath.

I expect Hellmuth has already been cast/committed to "Barbie 2, The Poker Movie" replacing Ryan Gosling's Ken, as "Phil", "Ken's Much Older but Hotter Brother".

And they would probably like a scene in I assume the only church in the world that has casinos on the wall next to the altar.

Lol, responding to your own post to keep the thread alive in the hopes an A list celebrity who likes poker finds this thread about a 15 year old script. B

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