cross-posting this from the HSNL thread because i didn't get any feedback/reply there - not that Ryan/KRANTZ have to.
think it was a really good episode/film.
However, we didn't really see him go from busto to robusto. i.e starting while working at McDonalds and discovering $5 sngs and movign up in stakes. why? - well it would have been pretty much impossible to have started filming him back in 2003 until now etc.
so i'm not sure how you could fix that. maybe get him to explain more about his job at McDonalds/$5 sngs and how his daily life changed? it definitely needed to tell more about this segment of his life. without the bitter... the sweet isn't as sweet. without seeing him as a busto we can't truly appreciate robusto.
basically, you covered it by starting at the present and then going back in time. which was and is great.... but not optimal imo.
one way would be to start filming about 10 small stakes players for a few years but obv that is way more hard work/difficult to do. like a longitudinal academic study?
also... while the bi-polar/breakdown segment may create negative impressions of poker players for some ignorant people, i think this episode was way better than say... an episode about some 22 yr old with a Ferrari who pours cristal on strippers and goes shopping for $10k watches every day.
basically, this isn't and shouldn't be 'The Fabulous Life Of..' - you can watch that bling stuff on MTV/VH1. richer/flashier isn't always better to watch as a documentary.
future suggestions - be more linear/focus on the early stages of poker life. it would be really interesting to see an episode on someone who has a wife/kids + balances it.
one more thing - are you selling these documentaries to tv channels? how are you recouping your production costs? is your aim high viewing figures or critical acclaim?
sorry this is so long but here seems like the place to give feedback etc. v good tho