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Originally Posted by FeralCreature
I don't know about moral authority. One can criticize aspects of every culture. You can criticize neo-nazis, racism, Christian extremism in white culture, you could criticize black and latino gang culture, Islamic extremism in Muslim culture, etc, etc.
It would be unfair to stereotype these entire cultures by the actions of their worst elements. In Gypsy culture, the stealing and begging part however seems to be so incredibly pervasive it really does appear to me that the bad outnumber the good and there is something rotten at the core of this culture.
As for my critique of your writing, you are neither unintelligent or naive and your vocabulary is fine, but you could do so much better if you tried to be more concise. I wouldn't care if you hadn't expressed your ambition to become a journalist. But since you have, I advise you to work on that aspect of your writing. My criticism is not meant to insult but to help, I see you could potentially be a good writer but you need some help.
Thank you for a thorough response.
I must clarify that I'm not trying to 'peg'
you personally, but really just address the dilemma that what you've expressed has in my view, highlighted.
I'm afraid the bolded part of what you've said is really just a variant of "I'm not racist, this is just true".
I mean, if one were to say:
"It would be unfair to stereotype these entire cultures by the actions of their worst elements. In Muslim culture, the jihad, absolutism and submission of infidels part however seems to be so incredibly pervasive it really does appear to me that the bad outnumber the good and there is something rotten at the core of this culture."
...y'know?
As for being a journalist, meh, we'll see. I'll get what I'm given. I'm not really gunning for it hugely and I'm honestly not particularly intelligent.