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Originally Posted by RacersEdge
I don't know how the director/writer thing works once filming begins, but it seems like a huge gap in the process if the director can effectively overwrite a key part of the story.
The Audrey element plays a huge role in defining the characters of Marty and possibly Maggie, so even from a pure "character development" POV, it's important.
As stated above, NP was showrunner, so he saw it. Still, he's not a director (as far as I know) and he might not have realized it was a problem during shooting (or he never thought it would be a big deal or interpreted the way it was). Once it was shot, the milk was spilled and there's nothing to do but try to save it (if he even perceived it to be an issue, which I don't really think he did). I've said multiple times that I think the doll scene was meant to show that Hart is a "see something, do nothing" guy, and that it wasn't necessarily meant to depict something about Audrey (although many people see signs like this in sexual abuse cases and say nothing). It was a two tiered scene for most of the observant audience members. First, it was a character revelation about Hart, and second it was a red flag that something was up with Audrey. If Audrey had something happen to her, it was the inattention of Hart that allowed it to happen, and obviously continue happening. We'll never know, because the dips*** cop never asked.
It might have been ham handed direction, only NP can answer that question, and it's one I'd ask him if I ever had the chance to interview him. There were three ways to lessen the significance of the scene in general. The first is no insert shot (I think it went to close up, but it's been too long since I've seen it). I don't think that would work, because it was a scene trying to tell Hart to ask his daughter about it, but he ignored it. The second was to cut out the scene with the sex drawings. The third was to cut out the threesome story.
Even so, it's still possible to tell a story about Hart's character through those three scenes.
1. Hart sees something clearly disturbing, but doesn't ask his daughter about it.
2. Hart sees that his daughter is drawing sex drawings, but is really uncomfortable bringing up what's going on, and doesn't try to get to the real reason why she's doing it.
3. Hart's daughter is arrested for drinking (I think), while having underage sex with two over age guys. As opposed to asking her why she would ever do something like that, he insults her in a horrifying and demeaning way, and takes out vengeance on the two guys.
If he were your boss, you'd call him an avoidance Manager. It's easy to see how those things could have been meant to be character touches, but it's probably slightly sloppy writing to not see how we can easily interpret that Audrey either witnessed abuse, or was abused.