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have faith in yourself and in each other. have faith in yourself and in each other.

01-16-2012 , 03:52 PM
I wrote a "poem today to help make my point"

I played my best session in a long while after this too.



When you die, there are no pearly gates, no burning lakes
The court is in session

You spent your whole life looking for the man in the sky
The man who says if you live or if you die
Your living a lie

Dont let someone else tell you how to live your life
You allready know how to do that

When you die there are no pearly gates, no burning lakes
The court is in session

Did you follow your heart
Express yourself in art
Smile

When you come face to face with the person you could have been
When you think about the things you did

Or didnt do

when the sand falls, the lights fades
will you smile
Do you deserve to smile?
when the light goes out you realize

There are no pearly gates, no burning lakes.
Just a smile



I hate religion. I love my family, I give notes to the poor. I hold doors open too long, I also steal, lie and cheat.

When I was younger I would be asked to brush these "bad" things under the carpet. dont.

**** happens. deal with it. learn from your mistakes and become a better person. forgive yourself. its hard to do. a lot harder than talking to a man in a box asking for forgivness. smile more, help people and go out of your way to make the world a better place.

everyone knows how to do the right thing.
infact being told not to do things as religion does, makes me want to do it even more. let me learn for myself.

I know im not the best person to make a point, or spell or write poems. Im not trying to be good at it, I just wanted to get this off my chest...
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01-16-2012 , 04:02 PM
DIs guy wrote a pome.

Pomes be old skool


OO RAH

Last edited by Fablisitude; 01-16-2012 at 04:10 PM. Reason: Sorry for mocking... essays are boring
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01-16-2012 , 04:19 PM
well to be honest its the first "poem" like thing ive ever done.
I dont know why, It just something I had to do.

art is the gateway to the soul. or it could just be the fatty im smoking talking.

and yes I feel for you. essays arnt just boring they are utterly pointless in my mind.
yet ive got plently to do this year. #hypocrit *sigh*
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01-17-2012 , 01:08 PM
"God's love never fails" is better than any poem.

It's a promise by someone who never reneges on their promises.
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01-17-2012 , 02:03 PM
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Originally Posted by Splendour
"God's love never fails" is better than any poem.

It's a promise by someone who never reneges on their promises.
What does this acheive?
What is your aim here?

I'm not intending to attack you. It just seems obvious that anyone who agrees with you will agree, but no one who doesn't agree will ever agree based upon what your saying here
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