Hi community,

Somebody heps me with this text?
I'm learning english and I make the PET test online, but in the website they cannot correct my text of writing.

Could you help me please?
Give me 0 to 15 marks maximum. Do how you want. Thank you guys.

A lucky escape
I'm travelling on the tub, there aren't to much people and I'm reading peacefull
a good book, It's a great bestseller but suddenly two staff guys from TMB entry on the vagon.
They starts to check the tikets from other people, and I don't payed and I'm scared.
What I should do? First, I look the situation, each guy are coming to me from each part of vagon and one minut
remaining for the next stop. They are more closer now, I have to do anything if not they will get me.
Now they are in front of me then suddently the dors opens and they goes out quickly.
UF, I'm very lucky.

What are you asking?

You are taking an English test online and you want an English speaker to edit your writing? Or you just want a grade?

Just a grade please

Well I can understand the plot of your story, but you have grammatical errors in every sentence, so I'll say 7.

5/15

What are we marking this relative to? Other non-english speakers? If so, it's probably a 10. I understand it.

If we are grading it relative to say a Grade 6 english student in the UK, it's probably a 3.

Yeah thats horrible sorry mate. My advice would be to work with a native English speaker before handing in any english work.