I've moved parts of a couple posts from this year's short story commentary thread here for further comment, because they involve an effect and often a style of story construction -- even reason for story genesis -- that is pretty tricky to pull off exceptionally well, and that I admire a lot when well done. They also involve an understanding of story itself that I'd like to touch on in more detail. First, the quotes:
This is what I said in response to a question about the value of studying authors and styles of writing that may not be especially modern or accord with one's own taste:
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To compare old to new again, match up the end of Henry James's story Daisy Miller to one of Carver's stories which ends with a man and wife fighting and the man leaving in a huff with one final thing to say to his wife. The last couple lines in the Carver story went something like, "He had one last thing to say to her. But then, he couldn't possibly think what it was." Daisy Miller ends with a man who had been dismissive of a girl the thought of as very trivial asking her servant at her funeral if ... oh ... if she had something she had wanted to tell him, or something like that. Last thoughts, that sort of thing. The butler tells him, "She would have appreciated one's esteem." It's an impeccably insightful, brutal comment that the butler dares to convey to his social better, and it puts the protagonist shockingly and definitively in his proper place, which he had thought was so far above the girl's. He realizes he was quite cruel in his trivial dismissal of what he only ever thought of as a trivial girl, and what his own worth, which he had put such great store in, might really be. He realizes that despite how little was ever asked of him, he hadn't been up to supplying even that. Both authors give last lines that deal with how heart-stopping sudden knowledge of one's own weakness and unkindness can be and how vertiginous the drop from self-assurance. But though one might not like one or another story or writer, one can see them both trying for similar effects in ways that have something in common. Studying that can be very instructive.
From John Cole in response to that and the larger post the above quote is embedded in:
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I like your comparison between Henry James and Carver because I can't think of anyone who would yoke those two oxen to the same plow.
What you can learn from both writers, too, is that it takes the cumulative force of the entire work to reach those final lines and produce the effect (which I think is what you're hinting at here).
What I had been trying to do, which includes what John was saying, was illustrate how authors of different time periods and nearly polar opposite styles can, despite stark differences between them, use the same story structures and the emotional effects those structures make possible, and use them to accomplish the same goals.
They can do this because while all storytellers are individuals, storytelling itself is universal. Certain structures, techniques, rhythms, viewpoints, emotional effects, and other aspects of storytelling are basic to the nature of storytelling itself, no matter what time or culture or particular story they manifest in.
An aspiring writer does himself a great service by paying attention to writing explicitly as a potential writer. It is not enough for a writer to read a work; he does well to seek to discover it. He should be able to look past the surface sheen to what lies beneath. When he does, he will find surprising correspondences in what would seem to be the most unlikely of places. And then he might begin to do the valuable favor to himself of asking why they are there, and what he can learn from it. This is not the sort of thing required of a reader or a critic. It takes place on another, sometimes deeper, and definitely more practical level. It is what informs the vision and understanding of a creator.
Last edited by Blarg; 01-27-2009 at 04:52 PM.