Re: ITT we confess how many bachelor frogs we relate to
hi im a fan of bachelor frog but i havent made any. however, i would like to offer my advice as far as what seems to work (for me) and what doesn't. this will be strictly regarding form and not content (for now)
bf theorem #1: minimize word count in bottom half. often the 1 word punchlines are the strongest.
bf theorem #2: the bigger the connoted gap between the two halves, aka the more steps the reader has to fill in to make the connection, the better. the reader feels smarter and thus receives more pleasure from it.
a perfect example of a strong second half is "fap" - its 1 word and the logical jump between anything and fapping is always hilarious
Re: ITT we confess how many bachelor frogs we relate to
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Originally Posted by Xkf
hi im a fan of bachelor frog but i havent made any. however, i would like to offer my advice as far as what seems to work (for me) and what doesn't. this will be strictly regarding form and not content (for now)
bf theorem #1: minimize word count in bottom half. often the 1 word punchlines are the strongest.
bf theorem #2: the bigger the connoted gap between the two halves, aka the more steps the reader has to fill in to make the connection, the better. the reader feels smarter and thus receives more pleasure from it.
a perfect example of a strong second half is "fap" - its 1 word and the logical jump between anything and fapping is always hilarious