We need more character development of chubs90. Its hard to get invested in the tale without some character backstory. For instance, why does he have a weight problem? Is it glandular? Has he been crippled in some way, and is unable to exercise? Has he tried diet after diet, only to gain it all back?

Also, I'd rethink the title. "Adventures" is a pretty strong word to describe someone sitting in front of a computer for ten hours. How about "pathetic life"?

loool

Good advice, and it I think it should be adventures, with all the advice I got I'm gonna redo it from scratch, give the back story and take it from there.

Even though it's a bag s**t I had fun doing it and learn alot from how to maybe make a better one.

THANKS ALL

drawings and use of colour is pretty good. Story needs work

Seems like there is no story going on. It's just a closeup of a scribbled face because op probably isn't much of an artist, and some random bbv phrases thrown out it attempt to get cheap lols. Need to work much harder on actually telling a story and not just putting a few catch phrases together and getting defensive about how much better part 2 will be.

I came here today looking forward to part 2. Im hooked OP, give me the goods!

LOL

Not sure if that's a good idea

fyp

Bump. Where the **** is my part two??

Theres potential man. And I think you are the best poster in BBV atm so you can make this happen. I knows it.

Anything that uses "le" is retarded

Part 2 needs to feature AcesFlow11 building a 4k stack.

yadda yadda yadda wheres part dos?

I was about to ask you the same thing

Why is LeDonk's head caved in on his right side?

Also:

Pro tip: It's blaow not blow.