It's a bit hard to understand or follow the story. Why does he just have one shot, is he putting up his whole roll for the buyin? Does the time on the watch mean anything? It's a little little distracting if not because it stands out. I am guessing the hero is non-baller as a Luke Schwartz reference is being made and the watch is wtf.
There is 1 donk left to bust before
the final table, but then an autistic frenchman enters
the final table 2nd in chips - this is confusing because we don't know what happened.
The artwork and layout is well done but I think it's hard for the readers to "get it"