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Originally Posted by txdome
Doubling down in first two sentences.
Simply changing one word makes it legit:
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LAS VEGAS, Nev. (FOX5) - If your planning includes traveling either to California or Utah over the long Labor Day weekend, there’s some good news and some bad news depending on which direction you are driving.
Works for the second sentence as well.
But this is probably better:
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LAS VEGAS, Nev. (FOX5) - If your planning were to include traveling either to California or Utah over the long Labor Day weekend, there’s some good news and some bad news depending on which direction you are driving.
But this might be best:
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LAS VEGAS, Nev. (FOX5) - If you were planning on traveling either to California or Utah over the long Labor Day weekend, there’s some good news and some bad news depending on which direction you plan to drive.
Last edited by PokerHero77; 09-09-2022 at 12:47 AM.
