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Originally Posted by poke4fun
Take this comment as a constructive criticism.
After reading through your posts in this thread, I have doubts of your ability to write in proper grammar.
Your book might have some great content, but you might want to invest the time to improve delivery.
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Luckily for the readers, I had some editing help. I pmed you, but also wanted to comment for the readers itt.
My life story might reveal a bit about why my writing style is primitive. Basically I never went to highschool, and for years I was working as a server and laborer from age 15 - 19 with no schooling, skip to 19 where I tested into college level course's (they only tested me on math, which I crush obv) and began schooling from there at my local community college.
I played poker professionally from ages 19 to now with plenty of "breaks" from school mixed in. In this life experience, besides a couple basic writing classes, I haven't had much of an education or deliberate practice in those skills.
If Crush SSNL lacks any grammatical eloquence, the rigorous conceptual quality will help you forget. And, as I said before, I did have someone edit it for me

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Thanks!