verneer invited me to take a look at a late draft (a couple of days ago).
I haven't read every word of it, but I've read it in more than enough detail to give verneer feedback.
My feedback, and my comments here, come not from a strong player, but from a student of the game, someone who's read a ton of poker books, and someone who is always looking to improve.
The book is a totally solid addition to the literature in my opinion (which, frankly, doesn't surprise me, given how useful verneer's vids and forum posts have been).
Up there with any other beginner's book imo.
Specifically aimed at FR but 6-max guys will get a ton out of it too.
For me, its number one strength are the hand history examples sprinkled throughout the book. You get a concept, and then you get examples, ramming home those concepts. It could just be me, and my preferred way of learning stuff, but it struck me as a very powerful way of explaining things.
And remember, those hand histories all come from verneer's Challenge project where he beat the very games he's talking about. It's a book written by a guy who genuinely knows his stuff, and has the graph to prove it.
As I explained to verneer, I might change the order of a couple of the chapters but that's a minor point.
If I had to fault the book in some way, I feel the chapter on the mental game devotes too much space to the work of other authors. (Work which verneer fully credits.) I think verneer's stuff more than stands on its own merits, and by cutting down on that chapter, he could have fitted in more of those hand histories.
Given the amount of good stuff the book contains, even that is a minor point.
I've read more poker books than I care to admit to, and I have a highly trained fluff/filler/BS detector. It didn't twitch once while I was reading
Building A Bankroll.
Highly recommended.