Hello fellow twoplustwo'ers,


I am looking for a position in the Toronto area as either a service rep. or anything I can do for quite some time to gain such valuable experience. The only problem is with my education as well as my work experience its not exactly enticing for HR managers to look more then once.

Now I love reading BFI section of other topics on twoplustwo and honestly think you people are some of the brightest business people on the internet. I love reading the debates on the future of companies most recently Research In Motion.

The positions im looking for are entry level positions such as bank tellers, inbound service reps for large corporations as well as financial services entry level positions. Really anything where there is a potential growth opportunity.


Im going to Post my edited version of my resume and tell me what you creative, young, bright people of twoplustwo think.

Thank you very much and Im so excited to hear some constructive in depth criticism.

http://www.filedropper.com/twoplustworesumeanalysis222

its really hard to post Word documents so I posted a link to a file hosting site so you could download the word document

"2007 to 2009 Sales & Marketing Diploma- Graduate
Niagara College, School of Business
2009 to 2011 Humber College
Various Courses "

I know nothing about CAN universities but what degree did you get at Niagra college? a bachelors? An associates degree?

Well i think that getting a business affiliated diploma or degree is like a very vast, or u could say that the best thing to do in this modern era.
i mean like today in this modern era you can say that no business can survive without any proper knowledge.

I would not recommend working as a bank teller. I would recommend working as an intern at a larger firm or an assistant or something very low level.

When you work as a bank teller, you usually do something like become a bank manager. Those are dead end jobs, you don't want that.

You want to get into a place where they have roles you'd be interested in and then get your foot in the door and do whatever you can to advance and move towards those roles. Being a bank teller probably will not do that.