still working on this....too much time on my hands, i know. i'm stuck on the third verse because the rhyme scheme and syllable repetition is incredibly difficult to mirror without running out of words and having to repeat them. whatever. anyway, heres the second preview of "Lose Durrrself". (will post rest when done...also, if you play the actual song while reading the lines it adds to the effect. song is "Lose Yourself" by Eminem for those who live under a rock.)
Lose Durrrself
look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
to gamble with every dollar you had...in one game
would you go for it, or just nit it up?
yo....
his seat is ready, table's weak, stare is steady
there's dirt on his air force ones already, stepped on by freddy
he's workin', below the surface he misses mom, he wants to see mrs. dwan
but he keeps on forgetting that he's broke now
the poker crowd's so wowed
wondering how, he can bail himself out
owes big amounts, to pros in macau
there's no doubt, dean's dead, bling-blang-blaow!
snap calls and we witness the, most sickest beat now he's
broke, so he wishes he'd wrote
home to dad, now can't cope and he's mad
we know
he'so sad and, he mopes, these triads ain't a joke
hellmuth's glad that he's broke
was so rad, now he's loc
durrr's a fad, and the pros
give up no cash to this bloke on float, that's when it's
back to a TAG and then, yo
it's a tragedy
he better contact raptor and hope today to bag a win
you never lose your roll on a loose flip, they loaned big
you won't live, you better never punt this dough (dough)
you only get one shot, do not blow up, you're a pro
this opportunity comes once from the triads, yo (you never)
you never lose your roll on a loose flip, they loaned big
you won't live, you better never punt this dough (dough)
you only get one shot, do not blow up, you're a pro
this opportunity comes once from the triads, yo (you never)