Boring. I'll check back again in a couple of weeks because maybe he just needs some time to find his groove. Everything was very...dry. Dry and disjointed.
More inflection in your voice.
More confidence in what you're doing--less of the "I want to do what you guys want me to do" repeated over and over. Just do you, brah. People respond well to authenticity.
More open-ended storytelling as well. I hear you answer questions on stream which is great. But somebody will ask a question like "what is your bankroll?" and you'll just answer "$xxx." Tell us a story instead of just answering like you're taking a multiple choice test.
You obviously have the poker skills. The presentation skills will come with time. The first GRE course I taught was a ****ing trainwreck. I was so worried about saying the right things that I didn't think about how I said them. God, I was so dull. Now I'm a rockstar in the classroom.
