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Originally Posted by spanktehbadwookie
Why would someone suddenly choose to accept previously rejected, ill- informed criticisms/opinions just because they have been repeated x amount additional more times?
Seriously, you really, really, really need to stop writing these kinda rhetorical questions. Everything anyone wants to express in English using rhetorical questions can better be expressed with simple direct statements.
Let's try to decode this pack o' gibberish.
Well somewhere in that word salad, it seems you feel you are subject to ill-formed criticisms. Of course, you couldn't find room in your 23 words to identify (a) what is being criticized, (b) what those criticisms are, or (c) why you feel they are ill-informed. Right there you're leaving your readers to guess WTF you're talking about. I'm going to guess it's "criticisms
of how you write". So, step #1, let's work that change into your post, and as a simple stand-alone sentence.
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The way I write has been subject to ill-informed criticism. Why would someone suddenly choose to accept this previously rejected criticism or ill-informed opinions of how I write, just because they have been repeated x amount additional more times?
OK, well at least there's now a little actual meaning in that word salad. Further trying to decode the jabber, it seems you are trying to express that you have previously rejected these criticisms. So, step #2, let's change your post, factoring out this as another stand-alone simple sentence...
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The way I write has been subject to ill-informed criticism. I have previously rejected these criticism. Why would someone suddenly choose to accept this criticism or ill-informed opinions of how I write, just because they have been repeated x amount additional more times?
OK, now let's try implementing
thechef's advice, and edit for length. Why did you include both 'criticisms'
and 'opinions' in your post? Once again, you're leaving your readers to guess. I'm going to guess no reason... you just, for some bizarre reason, like padding your posts out with meaningless words and phrases. Step #3, let's remove this part...
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The way I write has been subject to ill-informed criticism. I have previously rejected these criticism. Why would someone suddenly choose to accept this criticism just because they have been repeated x amount additional more times?
OK, getting better. Now let's try implementing my advice, and avoid rhetorical questions. What you're really trying to say is that you're not going to accept this criticism simply because it's repeated. So step #4, rephrase your statement as a statement...
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The way I write has been subject to ill-informed criticism, which I've previously rejected. I'm not going to accept this criticism now simply because it's been repeated.
See... now isn't that better ?
?