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Originally Posted by XTPCZ
Hey dude: probably the more important thing someone could really comment on is the dynamics of the performance, but i think with this video/audio quality its kind of hard to really capture the dynamics of the performance (the audio is distorting at times, so its kind of maxed out the whole time and is self-limiting) so its kind of hard for me to really comment on that aspect of the performance.
that said, as it relates to the rhythmic elements you're killing those faster arpeggios for sure + your left hand control is really working well doing a great job to be sure to not overstate it's presence in parts and drawing it out in other places (sorry im lacking specific locations for this).
I think the only thing I might say you could do more to make the piece your own is perhaps a slight bit more rhythmic embellishment perhaps? You do a great job keeping time, but maybe you can stretch certain parts rhythmically (in the first movement for example during the juxtaposition at the outset of the piece say), pushing and pulling a bit more ahead and behind the beat.
The one thing i've always liked about Chopin, especially in the Nocturne's at least, is the room he has in the music itself that lends itself towards conveying emotion through subtle rhythmic changes (sort of like a dynamic range i guess, huh?). Quick example, and you're kidn of doing this already but around 9:15 at the beginning of the downward Arpeg. i think you can build up pace just a bit more using the left hand to anchor w/ a touch more legato and your right hand picking up pace for run. There's no necessity and its rather subjective but i've always enjoyed really pushing Chopin's pieces rhythmically in that sort of way to draw out the sort of yearning and wanting that melodically exists within a lot of his compositions.
Dont take it as these are huge glaring things though - you did an amazing job, would definitely listen to your performance again for sure.
If you're so inclined get a hold of a better audio recording device though - Roland through its Edirol makes a decent portable recording device that i believe records straight to USB in half decent quality.
So again, awesome job dude!