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12-24-2015 , 06:33 PM

Judit Bowlgar

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Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 104

i'm in the coaching biz, and i wanted to get more students, so i put together an ad that would appeal to people based on what they seem to like in their products.

but it hasn't got me any new customers in the month that i've used it. i would appreciate some critique! i realize i misspelled my name, but that is a minor detail.

thank you.

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12-25-2015 , 10:26 AM

ScottTK

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Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 355

Since you included "No salt added" and "No pulp", I'd suggest throwing in "gluten free", seems to be the thing right now.

I also think that, for the few that live under a rock and don't know you, there should be a reference to the feline nature of the lessons.

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12-25-2015 , 11:54 AM

The Yugoslavian

STTF HUC II Winner

Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 25,040

I'd recommend putting your rating on the ad. ~5 times just to make sure it's not missed.

And, yeah, gluten-free is probably key, I think everyone has moved on from salt and pulp tbh, :/.

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12-25-2015 , 01:13 PM

QuantumCage

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Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 124

Pretty horrible. At least photoshop Nakamura if you want to go that way

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12-25-2015 , 03:28 PM

networth

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Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 2,208

needs a few guarantees in there. And Hurry...price goes up end of the month.

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12-25-2015 , 03:28 PM

BobJoeJim

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Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 11,200

I assume, since you didn't specify otherwise, that your coaching is genetically-modified? I'm not comfortable putting weird Monsanto frankenchess in my brain, so I'll have to pass. Sorry.

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12-27-2015 , 11:56 AM

rockfsh

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Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,530

Add "No dogs allowed but fish welcome (as cat food)."

Last edited by rockfsh; 12-27-2015 at 12:07 PM.

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01-02-2016 , 02:18 AM

KingDan

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Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 7,567

Include the pertinent details, what is your rating, how much does the lesson cost, etc.

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